I liked it
I thought th first part of the song was great, but definitely needed to be more diverse. The drums were good, but not great when only playing by themselves.
I think that oyu should not have had both parts of the song together, they just didnt fit well, and they seemed like two different songs.
The clarity was good, originality pretty good, diversity ok..., and the effort pretty good.
The song overall deserves an 8 in my opinion. It was a good first song, good luck with your others.
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